Score: 0

"WOW"

submission: North Pole Shenanigans

date: March 7, 2009

Those are some pretty wild shenanigans

Score: 7

"Needs to be longer"

submission: TIH - Hugs

date: January 10, 2009

Hardly ever do the first installments in a series ever make front page but you my friend have done it. I must say that this is quite the, shall I say, quirkiest animation I have seen on Newgrounds. However, and this is a big one, It needed more material. It was way to short and there was a lot more you could have done with the subject. Just remember to make your next flash longer.

~DearionL;)

Score: 7

"Well, it wasn't boring."

submission: $00pah NiN10Doh!

date: January 10, 2009

Now I of all people love flash collabs and this is quite good. However there were certain points while watching this that just plain weren't necessary. At times the jokes seemed to turn into wtf moments where I was left scratching my head trying figure out what the hell was going on only to realize that it's just complete nonsense. When trying to tell a joke(and this is only aimed at the guilty ones, not all of you) try to make it jump of the screen and not have the viewer try and think about it just to get a laugh. But all negatives aside this was a very funny collab right up there with the greats. Hope to see a second installment.

~Dearion ;)

Score: 8

"Long time no see."

submission: Blockhead: Episode 11

date: January 10, 2009

Well Swain it's been a long time and I must say you sure as hell do know how to make a classy entrance. Yet again you bring light to Newgrounds with your wonderful comedic talent. However I kind of have a question. Is Ghostmas just Halloween with a different name or a holiday all its own? In wich case that means you have never submitted a Blockhead flash for Christmas. You should try making one for next Christmas. But anywho, you have yet again shown your ability to make people laugh. I can not wait for your next work. Really looking forward to the crossover you were speaking of.

~Dearion ;)

P.S. Don't let the 8 discourage you. I still like it very much, you just didn't score a 10 in all 3 categories(animation, art, and plot).

Score: 0

"Youtube"

submission: awesome new band

date: December 20, 2008

This is a flash website, not a place for videos. Put this on Youtube.

Score: 5

"Don't post attempts."

submission: Madness redemption Trailr

date: December 8, 2008

Practice flashes are ok for yourself or friends to watch at home but posting a test flash is not something you want to do. Make a full animation and post that.

Score: 5

"I love that song."

submission: Meth

date: October 19, 2008

However I do not love it as much as sex and wiminz. But it was ok. I hope to see more from you.

Score: 7

"My review of Cyclops Dream."

submission: Cyclop's Dream

date: October 15, 2008

Animation: I love the cartoonish look of this whole animation. Usually I am not a fan of it but I have to say that the style you chose did this flash justice. 9/10

Sound: This is what set me away from giving this flash a higher score(in the most part anyway). Let's start with the horrendous clipping. You're supposed to fix those sorts of things before you post your flash. Second, and you knew this wouldn't go unchecked, the cheesy and out of place sound effects. Not every single action or movement needs a sound effect. Not to mention a lot of times the sounds didn't have anything to do with what was occurring. Last is the music. It felt out of place and I have to say that you did not make the best music selection. Think before you slap any old tune into your flash. 4/10

Plot: The plot was very interesting and I have to say in the end there is a great moral behind this story "you get what you get and you don't throw a fit." 8/10

Overall: This flash has great animation and a very interesting storyline. However you need to start making better choices in your sound effects and your music.

Score: 5

"Are you kidding me?"

submission: Team madness preview

date: July 14, 2008

Two bullet shots? I understand that this isn't a complete animation but seriously. If you're going to give an apetizer then make sure it's good enough for me to want to eat the whole sandwich. I can not eat a sandwich without mayonaise and pickles. You need to put condiments on your flash anima-I mean pizza or else it won't taste good to us. If we're going to taste the batter before you bake the cake then atleast make sure the batter is delicous so that we'll be ready for the cake. Don't give us a free sample if it doesn't taste good enoguh for me to buy it.

Now look what you did. You went and made me hungry.

Score: 0

"Hey idiot"

submission: Blowjob

date: July 10, 2008

Ever heard of the audio portal? Use it.